…untitled and unfinished…

dry river of tears
there are other ways to cry

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6 thoughts on “…untitled and unfinished…

  1. ann says:

    … held deep down inside

  2. liquidquick says:

    thank you ann, that is one possibility. if i get a few more, i may choose one and finish the poem, or i may just leave it unfinished. its a very indecisive tuesday, today.

  3. plum blossoms
    cry out
    for attention

  4. howard says:

    …rinsing out your fears

    -I know, it rhymes. That’s been a problem of mine recently 😉

  5. cathy says:

    My heart’s a fountain
    or
    deep well of sadness
    or
    meloncholy rain

    Isn’t PMS great:)

  6. liquidquick says:

    howard – you have just been penalized 5 karma points for rhyming haiku lines. careful not to drop too low, or you get hit with a monthly maintenance fee…

    cathy – i will have to take your word for it about the PMS… i don’t have the right parts to comment either way… however, i do like the phrase ‘melancholy rain’

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