…peace offering…

look to the heavens
a single white feather falls
with no bird in sight

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4 thoughts on “…peace offering…

  1. liquidquick says:

    thanks. i’m thinking of changing this to

    up in the heavens
    a single white feather falls
    carried by the winds

  2. kimtelas says:

    Why?

    No bird in sight

    Yes, was my response.

    Kurious Kim

  3. qazse says:

    I prefer the original by a long shot.

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