…stay inside ’til evening…

when the door opens
momentarily blinded
by the mid-day sun


3 thoughts on “…stay inside ’til evening…

  1. Karasu says:

    I really enjoyed this sketch of life. Thank you.

  2. liquidquick says:

    thank you, the scene was quite comic. i was at the top of some stairs and across from me was a white wall, so when i opened the door there was this blinding flash of light. i staggered back from the recoil and almost went headfirst down twenty steps… the resulting haiku would have had a completely different tone and a lot more words with four letters…

    k, what happened to your blog, the link gives a ‘not found’ error?

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