…assassin school lesson #6…

March 8, 2007 at 1:19 pm (haiku, humor)

hiding the body
in soft mud saves time, but its
easier to find

this week’s one deep breath topic is dirt and mud.   why i immediately think of burial plots and offing people, i don’t know…

8 Comments

  1. Mike McCulley said,

    a body hides
    in a red dress –
    easy to find

  2. Crafty Green Poet said,

    that’s kind of creepy isn’t it…

  3. liquidquick said,

    dancing red dress spins
    among the other flowers
    lost in the bouquet

  4. Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) said,

    he holds
    the flowers out to me
    do they wink?

  5. Megan said,

    good job of seeing the shadows…and as a counterpoint

    body buried deep
    under civilized mandates
    no one is looking

  6. liquidquick said,

    Patricia:

    they wink and sparkle
    bright are the liquid diamonds
    upon the petals

    Megan:

    we will all be found
    through mountains of apathy
    our cultural tomb

  7. Fred flintstone said,

    Noone can find the body in the sea

    • Keida-chan said,

      if it washes up on shore they can, to keep that from happening tie them to an anchor.

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